This is pretty epic. If I had to nitpick anything it'd be the cricket bat. The blood on it seems more painted on and dripping than splattered. I think, also, that the holes in the bat near the hand grip is a bit distracting. They draw your eyes more than they should, especially taking into account the way the hole seems to follow the same contour as the hair at Shaun's part. But, I think that you are on the right track and with a few little tweaks, this could be one of your best pieces. And that's saying something.
You know, the bat was re-drawn and re-positioned more than anything in this pic. It's pretty crucial to the balance of the whole piece, and I know it's not right. I agree that the blood should be splattered. I didn't want it to be to busy/messy, but I think I'll go back to that.
I'm not sure what you mean about the holes, though? Are you talking about the dart? If that's not immediately apparent, I should do something to fix it.
Thanks for the flattering words and the constructive feedback, Dane. I really appreciate it!